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  • CasE said 281 weeks ago

    Not a huge fan of this color combination :(
  • thejakeyl88 said 281 weeks ago

    Why say first? Why? Anyways, this is a really sweet design, love the vintage look. No money for me still, darn it. Been missing out on some good shirts here lately. Keep em coming!
  • bahbahbah said 281 weeks ago

    Yeah the design is cool, but I don't know if I like it on brown. Maybe a real dark navy blue would make me consider buying this.
  • Gimmik said 281 weeks ago

    Everyone is always all excited to be the 1st to post. I think it's kind of annoying. Waste of a post. Anyways

    I like this design. Clean and simple. I don't see me wearing this though.
  • fightabunny said 281 weeks ago

    Amazing work on the portfolio link.
  • jimiyo said 281 weeks ago

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    I saw this under the submissions. Very delicious.
  • jecrt said 281 weeks ago

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    Nice! I think the colors are great!
  • cdoty said 281 weeks ago

    I like the hi-lights, but the design fails to 'grab' me.
  • cbass99 said 281 weeks ago

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    nice design, refreshing! cool work APNEAFIX!

    p.s.
    if you guys want to know who's eighth, it's me! because i'm the eighth one on the list.
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    smurf, as i was typing, i became the 10th! sheit.
  • Kenon said 281 weeks ago

    buyying! first one in about a week I really like
  • curb1510 said 281 weeks ago

    So tempted, but like bahbahbah (never expected that that would come into a sentece)I think a nice navy for the blank who have been great.
    Still, lovely work.
  • jindc said 281 weeks ago

    kind of looks forced or incomplete because it's just on the top - might work as a whole-front design, or just centered lower.
  • biotwist said 281 weeks ago

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    hey at least both shirts are the same color
  • cls62 said 281 weeks ago

    I agree, put it on navy.
  • AGrant311 said 281 weeks ago

    Not first. I always wanted to do that.
  • thejakeyl88 said 281 weeks ago

    I think the look of it, how its faded at the top, really works well with the limits of printing. Instead of a defined cutoff point its pretty well faded and blended.
  • addsteve said 281 weeks ago

    This design is a bit uninspired.

    The white lines around the curves make it look shiny, which seems to be in direct conflict with the vintage feel.

    I also agree with others that the color combo is not quite working either.

    Hope I am not being too harsh but I assume other artists want constructive criticism.

    These critiques are merely my opinion, so please consider them as such only.

    Congrats on your win.
  • addsteve said 281 weeks ago

    On a more positive note, I really like a lot of the work on your portfolio site.
  • verilens said 281 weeks ago

    Cheese IS fantastic, isn't it???

    I'm torn on this one :/ I actually like the brown. I agree that the design ends at the top a bit abruptly. Uuuuunnggghhh...can't decide...oh well, I suppose I've got all day :)
  • eludingsun said 281 weeks ago

    i actually like the colour combo, in a way.

    but still no buy, looks like a design i could pick up anywhere.
  • YutFree said 281 weeks ago

    Layne: It's possible to set up your board to delete any post whose content is "first" or any iteration thereof ("Gargamel," etc.).
  • eludingsun said 281 weeks ago

    i agree with yutfree, something along the lines of at least attempting to stop the "first" post.

    they're are such a waste.

    even better yet, people could just stop doing them on their own, wouldn't that be even easier?
  • Arrow said 281 weeks ago

    nice distressed feel
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