I made this shirt. I dont if theres anything i should add or do whatever to it. I think it could use something extra but im not sure what. Any ideas?
http://s1284.photobucket.com/user/jasonraff/media/ZFInish_zps47af5823.png.html
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    51 weeks ago
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    51 weeks ago
    I like the combo and a very cool idea,
    just think you need to find a way to make Link stand out from the moon background, to me his shape gets a little lost
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    51 weeks ago
    EK1NG said: I like the combo and a very cool idea,

    just think you need to find a way to make Link stand out from the moon background, to me his shape gets a little lost


    i was feeling the same way about that. do you think theres anything i should do to that bottom portion? it just looks a little boring with only the grey.
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    51 weeks ago
    maybe try to stay away from making the moon black, maybe just a slightly darker shade, your maybe you could brighten up the moon all together and make it a glowing light source (it would make the foreground stand out more and look more like the classic nightmare b4 christmas image)
    here is an image to better illustrate the glowing/bright moon
    http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/353/1/f/majoras_mask_album_by_reevolver-d5ois9o.jpg

    as far as the hill/bottom portion you may want to convert it to a greener/(dark green since its at night, light green where the moon is shining on it) to give it a more hyrule feel. or add in some majora/moon looking jack-o-lanterns like the nightmare b4 christmas has
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    51 weeks ago
    EK1NG said: maybe try to stay away from making the moon black, maybe just a slightly darker shade, your maybe you could brighten up the moon all together and make it a glowing light source (it would make the foreground stand out more and look more like the classic nightmare b4 christmas image)

    here is an image to better illustrate the glowing/bright moon

    http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/353/1/f/majoras_mask_album_by_reevolver-d5ois9o.jpg


    as far as the hill/bottom portion you may want to convert it to a greener/(dark green since its at night, light green where the moon is shining on it) to give it a more hyrule feel. or add in some majora/moon looking jack-o-lanterns like the nightmare b4 christmas has


    http://s1284.photobucket.com/user/jasonraff/media/zelda2_zps9e4e2e87.png.html

    heres the final design that im probably gonna submit. feedback?
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    51 weeks ago
    definitely looks better, link stands out more which is nice and the bottom has a more depth and detail to it now.
    what program did you design this in?
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    51 weeks ago
    EK1NG said: definitely looks better, link stands out more which is nice and the bottom has a more depth and detail to it now.

    what program did you design this in?


    http://photogramio.com/photoeditor

    it works pretty well but takes a while to get used to it
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    46 weeks ago
    thinking about coming back to this because i thought it was a good and idea but obviously wasnt chosen to be made. anyone want to give me some tips on how it can be made more attractive or more appealing to fans and the teefury guys?
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    46 weeks ago
    Is the picture not displaying for anyoen else?

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    46 weeks ago
    jasraff said: thinking about coming back to this because i thought it was a good and idea but obviously wasnt chosen to be made. anyone want to give me some tips on how it can be made more attractive or more appealing to fans and the teefury guys?


    The foreground lines are completely different from the background. The foreground looks like it was done in Paint, with no aliasing to the line. The background has a smoothness to it that the foreground doesn't.

    Make that big enough to fit on a t-shirt a foot wide, it becomes more pronounced.

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    46 weeks ago
    Just want to add: sorry for the harshness. I'm going to do a post regarding submissions that aren't making the grade with TeeFury, and why that may be.


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