First thing that strikes me is the black shell, it totally slams the breaks on the flow of the design. There's a lot of dynamic movement in the original Pink Floyd design, and the black shell feels like it's interrupting.
And the shells either need to be larger or the triangle needs to be smaller
I agree with becks... th triangle should be a tad smaller also the exiting shells should be angled more downward. I have no problem with the black shell I understand where it's coming from.
http://media.npr.org/assets/blogs/thetwo-way/images/2010/03/darkside-6e92bb0bebbc1f73b43a315261d4f5e1f0006e55-s6-c10.jpg
photo of the original cover.
also that's darkside of the moon not The Wall(though really title not that important :))
And the shells either need to be larger or the triangle needs to be smaller
http://media.npr.org/assets/blogs/thetwo-way/images/2010/03/darkside-6e92bb0bebbc1f73b43a315261d4f5e1f0006e55-s6-c10.jpg
photo of the original cover.
also that's darkside of the moon not The Wall(though really title not that important :))