Teefury

Personally speaking I'd like the last flying superman to be higher... maybe over the cape

I guess it isn't clear enough.. he isn't flying. He's falling to one knee has he reaches for the kryptonite. I was going for the rise and fall of Superman.

Not a bad concept, but the execution is... lacking. I didn't get the fact that he was falling in front of Kryptonite, nor do I really like the idea. If you're aiming to sell to Superman fans, they probably wouldn't want a shirt with him looking weak or lame. And banking on Irony to sell a design is a risky gamble. If you had him taking off in flight, it'd probably make the design a lot stronger.

Thanks. Appreciate the perspective. Good point! I did contemplate originally just to have the transformation into Superman and end it there. It wasn't until later I thought adding the Kryptonite made it a little more interesting. Now I'm considering removing it and just having him take off... especially if the execution isn't clear.

Did a quick tweak just to see if I liked the concept better... I think I do. Have to work on it more. Thanks.

I like the removal of the Kryptonite, but I would work on both the pose of the final stage and it's proportion compared to the other stages. I think it looks like him flying towards us, but the other stages aren't quite so dynamic, and it makes the final one squished and weirdly as small as the baby stage. Sorry, I'm not trying to tear your design apart!

Nope. I always like feedback. Sometimes I agree and sometimes I don't but I like to hear what others see or think. Definitely an improvement with him flying away and you have valid points. I think I like the rollercoaster effect starting low and ending low. The final Superman might need some tweaking. He's definitely at a different proportion then the rest but I think I might like it that way... almost capping off the final stage. Appreciate the input!!

I like this without the kryptonight(thought it was a city hence flying.) I like the up anddown now that last bit doesnt distract anymore