Teefury

hehe. i'd say make the outline a little thinner. the intersection of the left arm and chest over laps a little bit. i really like the lines within the picture, like on the suit and whatnot. maybe erase the outline totally or make it more like the outline of the briefcase? not real sure about the grey, love the idea though.

Thank you, these are the changes I have made to it, some of them are the things you mentioned

Sorry about that, having a bit of trouble getting it to post

I like it!