I know this design has to many colors for teefury. Just hoping to get some feedback. First off, any suggestions on which colors I could cut to submit it to teefury? Second, the word bubble. Is it an ugly eye sore? Third, is the reference to obscure? I got the idea while playing Warhammer: Space Marine. The main character will shout, "For the Emperor!" every once in a while. So made me think of this. Anyway, thanks for the comments!

Warhammer wiki page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Warhammer_40,000:_Space_Marine

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    88 weeks ago
    You could cut the red, and have the marine without a cloak. I know that makes it very neutral, and it's a shame to lose the spot colour. Maybe the white highlights could be downgraded to grey?

    The people who will get the reference won't need the speech bubble to make the connection. However, if you want the text in there somewhere, I think I'd prefer it underneath, more as a caption.
    Loving the mash-up!
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    87 weeks ago
    Thanks for the suggestions! I would hate to give up the clock. I guess I will submit it to the other place I was thinking of. Anyway, here is an updated version. Let me know what you think.


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