I like it! Marceline and flame princess are the perfect Sue and Johnny. I would have thought Jake would be Mr. Fantastic since he's stretchy. Maybe Finn as Ben or Susan Strong since she's already gigantic.
The art is really good! Looks like Penn Ward did it himself!
Depechematt said: I like it! Marceline and flame princess are the perfect Sue and Johnny. I would have thought Jake would be Mr. Fantastic since he's stretchy. Maybe Finn as Ben or Susan Strong since she's already gigantic.
The art is really good! Looks like Penn Ward did it himself!
Thanks! I originally got the idea because of Jake's stretchy arms, but I didn't think Finn would make a very good Thing, plus I felt Finn should be the leader like Mr. Fantastic is.
...I'm not HUGELY familiar with Adventure Time, have only watched a handful of episodes...but...Jake doesn't look like Adventure Time style. I wish I could be more specific...but...he just kinda stands out. :/
schrody12 said: ...I'm not HUGELY familiar with Adventure Time, have only watched a handful of episodes...but...Jake doesn't look like Adventure Time style. I wish I could be more specific...but...he just kinda stands out. :/
I agree with this, also the perspective of the "4" looks a little off. I think the main key is messing with Jake's head. His head and body are usually a singular unit. Otherwise I like this! But they also need to be tied together, a giant "4" in the background might be useful.
schrody12 said: ...I'm not HUGELY familiar with Adventure Time, have only watched a handful of episodes...but...Jake doesn't look like Adventure Time style. I wish I could be more specific...but...he just kinda stands out. :/
I agree with this, also the perspective of the "4" looks a little off. I think the main key is messing with Jake's head. His head and body are usually a singular unit. Otherwise I like this! But they also need to be tied together, a giant "4" in the background might be useful.
Beemo as dr.doom you guys, that'd be hilarious.
or maybe Gunther as Galactus and the Ice King as the Silver Surfer!
Hi NinjaStart, think you have a great concept going on here.
I like the idea of a four being in the design, but I feel it should be a heavier, stubbier, solid typeface. That and their placement over the four seems off.
nikoby said: Hi NinjaStart, think you have a great concept going on here.
I like the idea of a four being in the design, but I feel it should be a heavier, stubbier, solid typeface. That and their placement over the four seems off.
Hopefully this is helpful
That, and Finn's shoes disappear on top of the 4, as well I just can't get over the idea that Finn's head should be just a BIT bigger, the proportions seem off to me.
I like the idea of this but I wish you mashed them together or something. They are to spread apart and I don't really like them with that 4 behind them.
The art is really good! Looks like Penn Ward did it himself!
Thanks! I originally got the idea because of Jake's stretchy arms, but I didn't think Finn would make a very good Thing, plus I felt Finn should be the leader like Mr. Fantastic is.
I agree with this, also the perspective of the "4" looks a little off. I think the main key is messing with Jake's head. His head and body are usually a singular unit. Otherwise I like this! But they also need to be tied together, a giant "4" in the background might be useful.
Beemo as dr.doom you guys, that'd be hilarious.
or maybe Gunther as Galactus and the Ice King as the Silver Surfer!
Made some changes. Any feedback?
I like the idea of a four being in the design, but I feel it should be a heavier, stubbier, solid typeface. That and their placement over the four seems off.
Hopefully this is helpful
That, and Finn's shoes disappear on top of the 4, as well I just can't get over the idea that Finn's head should be just a BIT bigger, the proportions seem off to me.
Feedback?