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Got another thing I just put together... just wondering what you guys thought. I made these helvetica men last week and thought it might make a cool shirt...



Just looking for feedback in general.

Think I can get away with the scratches or is it too cliche? Other color combos you might wanna see? Etc...

Thanks all.

smurf just realized that only the first one has his feet on the ground. Just disregard that for now please! Hehe
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    264 weeks ago
    HVmanart.jpg

    OK at someone over at Emptees advice I made it into 6 panels instead of 8.
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    264 weeks ago
    Son of a smurf... here is the 6 panels:

    HVmanart2.jpgWe really need an edit button hehe... now I have to look like an idiot in front of everyone!
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    264 weeks ago
    6 boxes was a great choice. I'd suggest having two boxes at the bottom with a blood spill, though- I think it helps to make the blood seem to be in motion. Maybe one of the first two boxes could be eliminated to make room?
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    264 weeks ago
    HVmanart3.jpg


    Added ground outlines to the boxes and blood in the bottom two frames.

    I also unhosted the other two images so that the thread isn't so long.


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