Thanks for the feedback. I think you guys were right about the white shirt being the wrong choice and I decided to change it to a green shirt. This change in colour also lead me to changing the ship and stars to white to make them more complimentary and streamlining the pikmin stems as they didn't stand out that well on the green and became a bit confused. What do you make of the changes?
Also what do you guys think about naming the design "Day 30"? I think it fits well with the design but I am unsure if a more direct name would be better for those unfamiliar with the Pikmin games.
Alternatives I considered are
Parting Pikmin
Homeward Bound
Journey Home
Distant Planet Departure
Do you like the original name or do you think another would would be better.
I think that you should stick with "Day 30." You'll get to describe what the shirt is about in the side Q&A. The design looks a lot better on green. I only wear white as an undershirt, so I'm glad you made the change. I will buy this if it's made available. Good work on this!
Thanks for the feedback and after a holiday induced delay I have returned taking into account the feedback. Below are four different versions experimenting with the reintroduction of the additional details which were originally removed as on the green I felt they lacked definition and made the design less streamlined, what are your opinions.
Additionally I have changed the colours slightly using a green which tee fury prints shirts on giving a better idea of how the printed design would look.
As for including the ears I did consider that option but each colour pikmin in shaped differently with some not having ears and frankly it would just annoy me to change their design in that way. Angain thanks for the feedback and any additional opinions would be appreciated, I think i'm near completing and submitting this design now.
Alternatives I considered are
Parting Pikmin
Homeward Bound
Journey Home
Distant Planet Departure
Do you like the original name or do you think another would would be better.
also, I like the colour of the shirt but I don't think Teefury distributes that particular one.
Additionally I have changed the colours slightly using a green which tee fury prints shirts on giving a better idea of how the printed design would look.
As for including the ears I did consider that option but each colour pikmin in shaped differently with some not having ears and frankly it would just annoy me to change their design in that way. Angain thanks for the feedback and any additional opinions would be appreciated, I think i'm near completing and submitting this design now.
I really, really want this shirt...