This design was rejected, and I'm not bitter at all, I'd just like some feedback from the good Teefury community :)
link to image:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/cr8f3zkfa4s87pn/564969_3237800827342_891374106_n.jpg
Any feedback is welcome ^__^ though if you're leaving constructive criticism then please be polite.
link to image:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/cr8f3zkfa4s87pn/564969_3237800827342_891374106_n.jpg
Any feedback is welcome ^__^ though if you're leaving constructive criticism then please be polite.
Not that it needs this but maybe see how it would look with like a ripple or something in the coffee or tea, or some kind of light reflection.... I donno just a suggestion but i think its a cool design!
check mine out if you have a moment:
http://www.teefury.com/forum/8362/_First_Submission_Critique__Gangsters_Love_Ice_Cream/
The only thing I think that needs work is "Cha". As it stands it is too thin and doesn't read very well. Maybe try a more stylish scteefurycopy font?
@RiteGuyShirt its not, but I'l have to re watch the films to see the cup again :L
@FreshTaDeath Ahhh, I hear ya. I'll fiddle around with the plate :) Also, liking the idea of a ripple :D
@nrique I get what you mean, it is a pain to read. I'd love to know what font you were suggesting... damn censoring!