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Hey, this is my first design/submission and i just wanted to get some constructive criticism! it is a portal / lord of the rings mash up!




http://r3pt4rlol.deviantart.com/art/Are-You-Still-There-309019981
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    95 weeks ago
    [IMG]http://i1064.photobucket.com/albums/u364/R3pt4rlol/rustilllthere.png[/IMG]
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    95 weeks ago
    Ah, here it is! haha

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    95 weeks ago
    The first thing I notice abut this design is the background and "eye" are very detailed... then the tower is just this sort of solid block of grey... maybe you could use the black to add some contours and texture in? never played portal so maybe the solid color is more on that side of the mash up?
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    95 weeks ago
    @RiteGuyShirt i do intend to add more details, in fact i have added a bit.. how does this look?

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    95 weeks ago
    Ooooo pretty. I like it maybe a few more artistically inclined can give you more precise feedback but I thnk it looks pretty good.



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