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Community Design Feedback

by NinjaStart
rss 52 weeks ago
Here is a mash up between Community and Sonic the Hedgehog:



I will still be working on smoothing the design out. Does the "Act 6 and Bonus Movie" make sense? Would it be better without it? Should I make it the classic white on black Sonic style? Or should I make some of the text blue pen scribble on white? Or should it be on blue?

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
11Comments
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    52 weeks ago
    UPDATE

    Here are two options

    White on Blue:

    greendale1.png

    Blue on White:

    greendale2.png

    What are your thoughts?

    I think the Blue on White has more of a Community feel to it. But I'm not sure how many people enjoy wearing white shirts.
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    52 weeks ago
    I feel like it needs an image to go along with it. It would be nice to see the cast mixed in somehow.

    and maybe instead of saying "bonus movie" just say "and a movie" so it'd be Act 6 and a movie. That way its closer to the quote.

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    52 weeks ago
    heyboova said: I feel like it needs an image to go along with it. It would be nice to see the cast mixed in somehow.


    and maybe instead of saying "bonus movie" just say "and a movie" so it'd be Act 6 and a movie. That way its closer to the quote.



    I made some changes:

    greendale2-1.png

    Does the blue on white look good?
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    52 weeks ago
    better, but I still think it needs some kind of image before it would possibly get printed.
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    52 weeks ago
    Big fan of Community here. The Act 6 and a movie is a little confusing; why didn't you just go with the quote from the show? You could do a much stronger design with "Six seasons and a movie".

    heyboova has a point that an image would make it a much stronger design. Got any good images of Abed & Troy?

    Out of the two updated pics I like them both but the white does have a stronger tie to the show.

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    52 weeks ago
    I picture the dean chasing a ton of dalmatians out of one of those robotic animal cages at the end of the level
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    52 weeks ago
    heyboova said: I picture the dean chasing a ton of dalmatians out of one of those robotic animal cages at the end of the level


    I may try to go somewhere with that, but I'm not sure. I was thinking of maybe having Annie's Boobs (the monkey) on a tree like in Sonic 2.
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    51 weeks ago
    heyboova said: I picture the dean chasing a ton of dalmatians out of one of those robotic animal cages at the end of the level


    I decided to go with your suggestion. Here it is:

    greendale4copy.png

    Do the colors work well? Does the dean look like the dean?
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    51 weeks ago
    the dean is cool, i'd kind of like it to more incorporate the "6 seasons and a movie" line because it's already leaning toward that. other than that pretty good
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    51 weeks ago
    num421337 said: the dean is cool, i'd kind of like it to more incorporate the "6 seasons and a movie" line because it's already leaning toward that. other than that pretty good


    Some more changes:

    greendale5copy.png

    Any feedback?
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    41 weeks ago
    greendale6copy.png

    I decided to rework it as a one color design this time. Feedback?

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