Teefury

Be honest, is a pop culture mash-up pun required to get printed?

Drop the Rango. The issue is Rango is a chameleon in the desert. And there were no mushrooms in the desert. Unless you're playing Super Mario Bros. 3, in which case, there are mushrooms in the desert.

Also, that's a lizard, not a chameleon.

I think you're better off sticking with your original idea.

I think the main problem is all the little jaggies. It would look better if your lines were smooth.

Yeah, the Rango thing was a joke to arbitrarily force a pop culture reference.

The jaggies will get cleaned up in the actual submission but I am using all the colors that I can, which makes shading harder. Here is the original:

http://outerdemons.com/art/kf.html

I kind of like the rough, stencil-like look that the 6 color version has. I guess we'll see.