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by ValHolla

rss 60 weeks ago

Just because we don't have Arc Reactors in our chests, doesn't mean we don't have a power source.

I'm having a hard time deciding wether or not it's done or needs more work. Maybe more random coffee stains? Or take them out completely? Or start working on a real arc reactor so I can be awesome?

Critiques and comments apprectiated!

Mock #1

Mock #2

Original artwork.

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21Comments Post a comment

Quasar60 weeks ago

I like the concept, although I think it would be kinda hard to figure out without your explanation.
Rhymo60 weeks ago

Really neat concept, but I didn't understand it until you explained it... I do like the simplicity of it now, though, and I am afraid I have no idea how to make it known without ruining the current design.. :S
ValHolla60 weeks ago

Hmm.. thanks for the feedback.. After thinking about it a bit more, I'm wondering if I put in (in the same coffee stain style) some explaining type like:

"Coffee
[image]
is my power source"

??
noxrider60 weeks ago

Or just make up a product name, like Arc Reactor Lattes. Or Stark House Premium Blend. Feeling particularly witty with the name game this morning, lol.
ValHolla60 weeks ago

i LIKE it.
challen1460 weeks ago

sick!
ValHolla59 weeks ago

What do we think?
acegamer659 weeks ago

Genius pun! When I saw the original shirt, I was unsure if I would buy it if it were ever on sale because I wasn't sure if anyone would recognise the reference.

I think the shirt as it is now would definitely be an instabuy. I still love the reference, but the joke makes it both more funny and more recognisable. Great work!
ValHolla59 weeks ago

More progress!
ValHolla59 weeks ago

bumpity.
ValHolla59 weeks ago

Minor tweaks. Changed the color of the type and scaled it down a bit to give the coffee stain arc reactor more emphasis. Near completion?
drummrgrl58 weeks ago

YES YES YES wonderfull! will buy this
ValHolla58 weeks ago

Thanks! How about some feedback about these two versions?
drummrgrl58 weeks ago

I think the green one.... it shows more of a starbucks feel
GloomStar58 weeks ago

I like the green one as well! Great Job!
drummrgrl55 weeks ago

Have you submitted it? i will sooo buy this one!!!

=/\= Live Long And Prosper
ValHolla55 weeks ago

drummrgrl said: Have you submitted it? i will sooo buy this one!!!

=/\= Live Long And Prosper
Yep! This is the version I subbed. I'm thinking of reworking the type to look like sort of a coffee cup around the stain reactor, though. And maybe bringing the opacity on the color of the type a little. I'll post another version here sometime in the future.
Psyoren55 weeks ago

I really like how it turned out, Val. I hope it gets selected. This is one I'll definitely buy if it shows up! When you submitted it, did you submit it with or without a background?
ValHolla55 weeks ago

Psyoren said: I really like how it turned out, Val. I hope it gets selected. This is one I'll definitely buy if it shows up! When you submitted it, did you submit it with or without a background?
Thanks Psy! I subbed it with a transparent background so nope.
ValHolla55 weeks ago

ValHolla said:
Psyoren said: I really like how it turned out, Val. I hope it gets selected. This is one I'll definitely buy if it shows up! When you submitted it, did you submit it with or without a background?
Thanks Psy! I subbed it with a transparent background so nope.

I mean without a background.
drummrgrl53 weeks ago

yea no one would want a Transparent T-shirt! lol

Live long and prosper =/\=

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