Hello all! I've been sketching a lot lately and also have been gaming a lot lately as well, and I decided to give tee shirt design a shot. I have been doing web and media design for 10+ years now, but never dabbed into clothing design, so consider this my first attempt. Let me know what you guys think! I'm open (and very used to) constructive criticism. Thanks all!

In case anyones wondering the text says "Nulla e reale, tutto e lecito" which means "Nothing is true; everything is permitted." If you've ever played an assassin's creed game im sure you already knew that though :)
~cheers

In case anyones wondering the text says "Nulla e reale, tutto e lecito" which means "Nothing is true; everything is permitted." If you've ever played an assassin's creed game im sure you already knew that though :)
~cheers
What does it say?
The quote is mostly from brotherhood I believe. I play with italian vocals and english subs. The quote itself is part of the "Assassin's Creed" that they repeat when initiating a new assassin. It translates to "Nothing is True, Everything is Permitted"
Thank you for the feedback! I actually agree with you about the font, it's tough to keep it stylized for the subject matter and stay readable. I did come up with a couple different versions though.
I actually think this looks a bit better, but i'll keep tweaking it
If you don't mind me picking apart your work, here's something I noticed in the new version:
it looks like the bulk of your letters on the top line aren't centered, that might be a bit nit-picky though.
My only other suggestion might be to take the shadow out from behind the white feathers, and the text. Good work!
What do you think?
Thank you so much
Long story short, this deserves a print! There's a serious lack of well made AC shirts out there