I think the roses in the circles might need to be replaced with more relevant images to the book. Also, the circles of dark grey touching the dark grey ring of roses should maybe be redesigned so that they don't share an edge that needs to be defined by a black line?
Great start. I agree with Chefleclef's comment about the feet. I also think the shadow under her arm and sleeve needs defining...maybe give the arm and sleeve a white outline...and just one last thing, she looks like a dude. And i realise it's hard to define gender in a computer program but something needs to be done...softer lines, lip color??? Keep us posted, great job...
drtimeywimey said: ooooh i like it... one question though... why is she in white?
i think its to supposed to be her wedding dress... am i right? if so i think the dress needs to be a different style. like cycodaddy said, she does look manish, i think its partially the nose too. also i think you should add some fire.... and/or maybe you could change the dress to the mockingjay costume....
overally good idea and start :D
angles a bit off.
Off to a great start though!
i think its to supposed to be her wedding dress... am i right? if so i think the dress needs to be a different style. like cycodaddy said, she does look manish, i think its partially the nose too. also i think you should add some fire.... and/or maybe you could change the dress to the mockingjay costume....
overally good idea and start :D