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rss 128 weeks ago
Hi folks

Had this kicking around a while so pulled it out today and made some alterations.
Wanted to give it a non flashy, blunt, dirty car repair feel.


Thought I would see if it's worth subbing.

Thanks again.

Automail Repair
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    128 weeks ago
    No Winry?
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    128 weeks ago
    I would buy this if Teefury offered it!
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    128 weeks ago
    I've never seen the show, but looks great!
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    128 weeks ago
    It looks great as is, but there isn't enough to it to relate it to the series... Then again I complain about Back to the Future designs like this that have random flux capacitors in them to help slap me over the head that it's a Back to the Future design. It's a really tough balance.
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    128 weeks ago
    Thanks guys.
    I can side with you regarding there are no immediate hard hitting images screaming at you and no Winry but this was intentional. I wanted to focus on crafting it like a more traditional and realistic logo of todays repair workshops and the like.

    All input is good input though and is exactly why I put this up for feedback, even if I don't feel it's worth submitting it's good to get opinions.
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    128 weeks ago
    perhaps to equate it you can work an elongated Alchemist circle into the background of the design?
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    128 weeks ago
    Love the real logo look of it, but I think a symbol like Winry, Al's helmet, or something to do with alchemy will really tie it all together...
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    127 weeks ago
    Personally I really like the design the way it is now and would buy it in a heartbeat. I disagree that you need to be more blunt and add something like al's helmet because I like the realistic logo and think that fans of the show would be able to get it and hey what's wrong with a little subtly?

    So I encourage you to submit this cause its a great design and I want this shirt.
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    126 weeks ago
    Right...
    From some feedback I did attempt some sort of tie in by making a transmutation circle within the main shape but it just didn't look right being oval. Also tested a circular one outside the shape and the more I played with it the further it got from my intended design. I didn't want to add any character images to this for reasons above.
    So, I scrapped it and submitted the image.

    thanks all for the input


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    124 weeks ago
    Love it :D
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    124 weeks ago
    What if you just had Edwards arm instead of one of the wrenches?
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    124 weeks ago
    His automail arm to be clear


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