Hey everybody so this is a new design I worked on with my brother. Thoughts? Should it be subbed? (interestingly enough we worked on it the day before the last VB shirt went on sale. Straaaannnggggeeee)
big venture fan, I like the design, but I don't love it yet.
for me, the sizes are off. the blue circle is way to big with not enough content to fill it. and I agree on the typographic issues: the fonts are kinda bland ... I'd do something hand-drawn for the band name, and redo the big huge block of text underneath ... it's just way to huge & blocky. in fact, I'd lose it in general and wrap this text around the circle somehow.
also the skull could use a nose ... imo
but definitely a neat shirt I'd order if spiced up a bit
aaand this:
the official SG vid for Jacket: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMtqy9_NbYg
Yellow
Jacket
Straight
Jacket
Smoking
Jacket
Full Metal
Jacket!!!
really depends on how well it's executed
right now the text is legible, yes ... but it also throws off the whole design (at least that's what I see, no offence)
Hey this is TeeKetch's brother. I'm working on some of the suggestions you all made for this poster which I'm grateful for and applied them to the design I've also made a few changes and am still working on it. let me know your thoughts!
And for those who haven't seen The Venture Brothers' Than get Season 1 and get started!
WE WANT MONARCH RELATED TEE'S!!!!!
I should have specified; Shallow Gravy is fine, the rest is a little bland. Maybe go for DIN, or Univers. Eurostile could be cool too, in allcaps.
for me, the sizes are off. the blue circle is way to big with not enough content to fill it. and I agree on the typographic issues: the fonts are kinda bland ... I'd do something hand-drawn for the band name, and redo the big huge block of text underneath ... it's just way to huge & blocky. in fact, I'd lose it in general and wrap this text around the circle somehow.
also the skull could use a nose ... imo
but definitely a neat shirt I'd order if spiced up a bit
aaand this:
the official SG vid for Jacket: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMtqy9_NbYg
Yellow
Jacket
Straight
Jacket
Smoking
Jacket
Full Metal
Jacket!!!
:D
right now the text is legible, yes ... but it also throws off the whole design (at least that's what I see, no offence)