Here is an inception design that I just submitted...

It's a design that I've had for a long time. I reworked it and made it much simpler then added the vintage accents around the main image as well as a bit of distressing. What do you think?

It's a design that I've had for a long time. I reworked it and made it much simpler then added the vintage accents around the main image as well as a bit of distressing. What do you think?
if i were to change anything, i would make the lines thicker so it's a little more bold, but otherwise i really like the design!
Oh, and sheepbiter, I believe there's a thread that can give you tips on how to dye your white/cream Teefury shirts. :-D
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One critique- the upside down guy doesn't look like he's walking on the stairs. Shouldn't part of his legs be covered since he's walking on the underside? Or was that not the intention?
It's an optical illusion. Try covering up the guy that is rightside up and see if it changes your perspective. Or you can kinda turn your head and that might help. Either way yes the way he his positioned is intentional :).
I very much like optical illusions and the work of Esher. So looking at this design makes me happy :)
There is the smallest detail catching my eye on this design. Something that you could fix if selected. It's the Kerning on Ariadne. It's a tricky thing to get right and a criticism that was raised on my last design here. It's something I'll be looking at when I revisit my design.
The Kerning Game http://type.method.ac/ really helped me improve my skills for future designs.
The font you have chosen suits the design well, but it's a heck of a font to kern in certain letter combos because of those little side tails. It might just need the 'riadne' of 'Ariadne' moving left until the side tail of the R touches the A. Or maybe not. As you'll discover, kerning can prove puzzling at times. :)
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