Long time lurker, 2nd time poster...
I submitted a design over a month ago, and at this point would safely assume it was rejected. So I thought I would share it and hopefully get some insights on improvements before making a second attempt.

The concept is pretty simple, a Fringe Gang and Scooby Gang mash-up.
Question: I have quite a few ideas for shirts, just limited time to get any art produced. Would it be much to my benefit to wait and submit until I have at least 5-6 pieces to put up, or is it just as well to submit one at a time?
Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
I submitted a design over a month ago, and at this point would safely assume it was rejected. So I thought I would share it and hopefully get some insights on improvements before making a second attempt.

The concept is pretty simple, a Fringe Gang and Scooby Gang mash-up.
Question: I have quite a few ideas for shirts, just limited time to get any art produced. Would it be much to my benefit to wait and submit until I have at least 5-6 pieces to put up, or is it just as well to submit one at a time?
Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
And as far as submitting 5-6 at time, MJ usually said that you would have a better chance on getting your stuff picked by doing just that.
Love the phantom Observer in there!
I had trouble trying to come up with only 6 colors to both encompass the basic Scooby gang palette AND the tone of Fringe. The "happy medium" might not be extreme enough for either cause. :-/
Does anyone have any suggestions for how I might salvage this one, or should I cut my losses and chalk the whole thing up to experience at this point?
Thanks!
Oh, and, i don't know if it's just me, but Walter looks like a floating sheet with John Noble's head.
I agree. If it looked more like the cartoon it'd be solid
Very nice drawing, well done, I like the cartoony/caricature style! If only there weren't a color limit because I think it would look amazing with another color or two. Ah well.
and I agree that the Scooby Doo reference needs to be pushed a little harder. I guess simply changing all their hairdos & clothes to look more like the Scooby crew could do the trick.
Fred (Peter) for example needs to have his kerchief & stupid shirt collar, Velma (Astrid) should wear a turtleneck and so on
and I think that would make it a perfect design. just give it a little more Scooby
anyway: great style, love the details & colours. what does the code at the bottom say?
LOL ... good one
When my co-designer (i.e., my lovely wife) and I were working on this, we saw it as a Fringe shirt first with Scooby overtones. We discussed how far to go with giving the characters attributes of the Scooby crew (haircuts, appropriate character clothes, etc), but the more Scooby-heavy it became, it more confusing & obscured the Fringe aspect became. It's along those lines we decided against doing them in the caricature style of guest-stars on The New Scooby Doo Movies. While people with a lot of character in their faces like Don Knotts, DonkeyKong Van Dyke, Jonathan Winters, etc, came through clear (which would work great for someone like Walter), others with less defined features like Tim Conway, Sandy Duncan, Davy Jones, etc, looked extremely generic, IMO. We were afraid that would be the case with Astrid, Peter and especially Olivia.
I just don't want to make it blatantly Scooby-Doo and then have the opposite problem of "It needs more Fringe elements". I do agree that Walter's shoulders could be tweaked though.
@kgullholmen - Yes, good deciphering. The code is JINKIES. The name of the shirt, btw, was "Zoinks, Gene!"
...now with 100% more Scooby garb.
My one problem is Olivia's mouth. It sort of looks like she has a little moustache.
I would buy it right away, great idea, and very well done
cant wait for tonight episode !
We've re-subbed it once more. Wish us luck!
I pledge to buy 4 teefury..... quite a few fringe fans in the family.