Teefury

For your first time I think its pretty good. looks professional in my opinion dont know if its for me though

It's a cool design but something about the wings of the angels looks off to me.

The inner wings of the angels are a bit off. It took me a second to recognize where the heads were because the inner wings kind of look like a dragons head or something.

Other than that great design!

But alas you're competing against a ton of submissions for dr. Who so its gonna be hard to stand out. Good luck

I love this!

I love this one! I agree that the curved wing is distracting; I thought it might have been part of another element of the design at first. But I would totally buy it if it was posted!

I had decided to go for a more "stylized" look to the wings. I will try a more plain look and see what that looks like. Thanks for the comments.

This is absolutely great.. i know i say this a lot, but if the teefury team pick this design, i will, WILL buy 2.

noelpenn said: This is absolutely great.. i know i say this a lot, but if the teefury team pick this design, i will, WILL buy 2.

Thanks dude.

That's a handsome shirt. Nice graphic style. Not too cartoony or cutesy. I hesitate to buy some other Doctor Who shirts because they're too loud but that one I'd probably actually wear.

not saying this is a bad or lame design,because it's not ... skillful execution, great detail, nice job on the perspective BUT I wonder how many versions of pretty much the same design (or rather varying designs including a phonebox + weeping angels + sonic screwdrivers) does the market really need?

So what I'm saying is: looks great, but has been done (maybe even overdone) before

I agree that the wings looks like dragon wings. It's hard to capture Doctor Who in a design because there's been so many Doctors, but this sums up all the main elements that run through the series. I like it.

kgullholmen said: not saying this is a bad or lame design,because it's not ... skillful execution, great detail, nice job on the perspective BUT I wonder how many versions of pretty much the same design (or rather varying designs including a phonebox + weeping angels + sonic screwdrivers) does the market really need?


So what I'm saying is: looks great, but has been done (maybe even overdone) before

Thanks for the compliment on my work.
I tried making it more of a crest or coat of arms look instead of a weeping angel / tardis / sonic screwdrivers thrown together. Hopefully I am able to beat all the others in quality.

Antistrophe said: That's a handsome shirt. Nice graphic style. Not too cartoony or cutesy. I hesitate to buy some other Doctor Who shirts because they're too loud but that one I'd probably actually wear.

Thank you so much!

charmingfan said: I agree that the wings looks like dragon wings. It's hard to capture Doctor Who in a design because there's been so many Doctors, but this sums up all the main elements that run through the series. I like it.

I'm working on an alternate version. I'm just going to tone down the arch of the inner wings. I see where people think it looks "dragonesque." I will post it later today. Thanks for liking it.

I've revised my design and took out the "dragonesque" arch of the wing.


Let me know what you think.

This is seriously awesome! FANTASTIC JOB!!!

The only thing I can think of to say is with the wings again :/ at least to me, it looks like the wings in the background don't attach to the angels' back, and the arched wings look like they attach in the middle of the angels' backs. That, and maybe I'm crazy, but it seems like the wings would be very different sizes when stretched out from this position. Like, the background wings go right into feathers after the joint in the wing, whereas the arching wings stretch a bit more before they go into feathers after the same joint. Does this make sense? Haha I feel like I did a very poor job explaining myself XD

But other than that, this is phenominal. I absolutely love the color palette, and the perspective is flawless. I'm not even a huge Doctor Who fan and I love this! :D