Caddywompus said: Is there a way to simplify the ice truck in the first M. Perhaps like a logo. There's a lot of text nested right in the that top corner.
I love the concept though, it would be nice to see each letter focus on one particular season.
kgullholmen said: one thing: that sharp bend in the POLICE LINE banner (on the left in the letter A) doesn't really fit well. it breaks the lineage but you'll have to look twice & really close to understand what's happening there
I suggest make it a continuous banner without that sharp bend ... it doesn't add anything but confusion and breaks apart the word MIAMI.
also ... the Bay Harbour Butches looks a bit like Emily the Strange, could use some tweaking
and since it's the trending topic of the day on TeeFury: include some nipples, preferably Lila's ;))
CoDdesigns said: Excellent use of the Bruno Mars greeting card reference... well maybe you didn't intend that! But it's what I see. I love dexter so yeah get this tightened up with KG's comments and I will be snatching it for myself.
... add some nipples.
jkilpatrick said: That is a good one. This design has convinced me to not finish my "Greetings From Hamsterdam" WIRE submission.
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