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I'm a new member on Teefury, and this is my first attempt at a submission. I'm a huge Doctor Who fan and have always wanted a shirt designed to look like the TARDIS, so I decided to try to make one. I would love some feedback on whether or not these designs look good, and how I could improve them.

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd110/lilshorty7923/Teefury%20designs/DW.jpg

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd110/lilshorty7923/Teefury%20designs/DW2.jpg

Thanks in advance!
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    136 weeks ago
    I would try to give them more depth by shading and not have them look so flat. Like, add some shadows around the door panels and windows. Also, alot of things look off center, like the crack between the doors and the police box sign text seems off.
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    135 weeks ago
    I can't believe I missed that it was off center! I adjusted the text at the last minute, which probably screwed it up. I'll add some shading and recenter it and post new picks in a few days. Thanks for the feedback!!
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    135 weeks ago
    good concept. needs a lot of work though.
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    135 weeks ago
    Some shading would definitely help, and the panes of the windows should be white - maybe using halftones if solid white is too in your face.

    I don't particularly like the second design, but with improvements would buy the first.


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