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Hello all. I'm not a graphic designer or any kind of artist by trade but I like to have artistic pursuits. I don’t have a portfolio of work beyond a couple of ten-second animations I started on in Adobe Flash and then fell out of love with along with a few short stories.

Anyhow, here's a design I've been working on that I thought I might share. I've actually submitted the first image but would still like to work on the design. Has anyone got any ideas on what else I could put on the placard he's holding? I've simplified my vision a bit, I was gonna create a faux-mugshot image. Should I add the height board behind him? Any tips or advice ...compliments (maybe).

http://i1201.photobucket.com/albums/bb345/kyle_J_morris/voyeur2.jpg

http://i1201.photobucket.com/albums/bb345/kyle_J_morris/voyeur1.jpg

http://i1201.photobucket.com/albums/bb345/kyle_J_morris/voyeur2.jpg


http://i1201.photobucket.com/albums/bb345/kyle_J_morris/voyeur1.jpg


EDIT: Looks like I failed at embedding the image.
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    149 weeks ago
    I really like the first one. The offset colors imply something sinister as you look at it and try and focus. However, the "I see you" doesn't work for me because he isn't actually looking at the viewer. It feels contradictory. Some of the smarter people here will be able to help with a better quote than I could ;) Nice design!
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    149 weeks ago
    "I like to watch"

    Probably a bit too creepy to have on a T-shirt though.
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    149 weeks ago
    I like it. Is this referencing something or is it entirely original?
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    149 weeks ago
    Thanks all. As far as I know the character is not in reference to anything. But one idea I had was to create a mugshot with a height-guide behind the character and have the placard make subtle references to a couple of films/books related to society surveillance (e.g. INGSOC DEPT / 0141036141 / MARK LEWIS / 16 MAY 1960 / VOYEURISM)


    Chuffy: That was something I thought of as well but kinda of like you I thought again and felt maybe it's too pervy. I had also previously put 'Peep Show / $10 / This Way'.
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    149 weeks ago
    Sorry if this comes across as inane but I thought I might as well have another stab at embedding the images.

    .voyeur2.jpg
    V1

    voyeur1.jpg
    V2 (plain)

    score?...




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