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Thoughts? Suggestions?
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    149 weeks ago
    haha very nice! i like it a lot! my only problem is with the second line of text being in yellow. i don't know why but it seems off to me to have one caption in white and one in yellow. i personally think i'd look nicer if both captions were white and you left the tools on either side of them yellow. (:
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    149 weeks ago
    Agreed^ . Very nice just change the text color
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    149 weeks ago
    It looks great, (I too agree with the text color) the only problem I see is using the exact p and f from the official logo. I would think Teefury would have trouble printing that.
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    149 weeks ago
    I made the revision to the text, and I reworked the P and F a little. Would you guys think it is enough change? If not, any suggestions?
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    149 weeks ago
    Might help to put link the image...
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    149 weeks ago
    Really really liking the coloring and hi-lighting on the 'Construction' and bolt heads. It looks very professional, like you would see on the best (most expensive) toy packaging.

    Can you get some hi-lighting on the other components? Don't over do it, but a few more shiny accents maybe around the edge of the red oval or something might give it extra depth.

    Perhaps make the tools a bit chunkier, sort of kid friendly like a my first tool kit type of thing.

    Overall a great idea, good colors. And on that shirt color it really pops. Good job :)
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    149 weeks ago
    Ooh, definitely like the idea of the chunkier tools. I'll be trying out both your suggestions. Thanks.
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    149 weeks ago
    Here are some of the revisions based on some suggestions..What do you guys think? Better? Worse?Photobucket
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    149 weeks ago
    Yeah!!!! :D Id buy
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    149 weeks ago
    MisterPhame said: Here are some of the revisions based on some suggestions..What do you guys think? Better? Worse?Photobucket


    Better :)
    The tools are a touch disproportional now. Google image search "Stubby Tools" (with safe search on!). You could even have pliers and a wrench.

    Would hi-lighting the "P and F" text as well be overboard? Just saying because of how good "Construction" looks.
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    149 weeks ago
    i agree with chuffy, the tools looked better thinner.


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