It's called "Shogunner & the Sumo Kid" & I really need some constructive critiques please...
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Crushem231 weeks ago5 colour print using half tones. -
LINK2DPAST231 weeks agoLooks really good to me. Only two weak points. The boy on top doesn't seem to be in the same style as the rest of the picture. That and the "Shogunner & the" text is very plain and being slapped on top like that makes it seem like an afterthought. I'd try to integrate it a bit more somehow. -
Stormink231 weeks agoWell this may just be a personal taste but it doesn't have enough continuity for me to wear it. But maybe others aren't bothered as much cuz I'm kinda anal! Heheh. But yeah I agree with Link about the text. -
Crushem231 weeks agoOkay I've redone the text...
