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It's called "Shogunner & the Sumo Kid" & I really need some constructive critiques please...
Shogunner & the Sumo Kid
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    274 weeks ago
    5 colour print using half tones.
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    274 weeks ago
    Looks really good to me. Only two weak points. The boy on top doesn't seem to be in the same style as the rest of the picture. That and the "Shogunner & the" text is very plain and being slapped on top like that makes it seem like an afterthought. I'd try to integrate it a bit more somehow.
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    274 weeks ago
    Well this may just be a personal taste but it doesn't have enough continuity for me to wear it. But maybe others aren't bothered as much cuz I'm kinda anal! Heheh. But yeah I agree with Link about the text.
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    274 weeks ago
    Okay I've redone the text...
    The Sumo Kid


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