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maybe its just me...but i'm not seeing aything

Argh, my inabilities smurf... Here we go:

Maybe a little too obscure? Yusuf was "The Chemist" in the movie, the guy from Mombasa that made the serum that would allow them to go three levels deep (dream within a dream within a dream). The idea behind the design was to make it look like a patent medicine label (you know, like snake oil and cure-alls from the 1800s).

After looking at it again, I feel like the train is out of place (even though it's a link to the film). I would like to incorporate the quote in the headlight if possible, though... would a banner be way too cliche?

i have to rewatch the movie as I haven't seen it since it came out so it is a bit obscure for me (at least at the moment)

i got the medicine label idea you're trying to portray right away though as its the first thing I thought of.

I'm not too sure what tips I can offer though so I'll just give you the "bump" to the top and let other actual artists advise you

A banner could work though if it fits the design. Play with it and show some different ideas you have going :)

love this. except for the train. maybe a guy/silhouette lying down dreaming the text instead. cuz the train was Cobbs' dreams/subconscious hitting everyone's dream. I know it occurred in The Chemist's level of the dream, but it almost has no relation to him. Or maybe have it in snake oil bottle form.

I like the train, it really provides an extra tie to the movie.