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I like the design. The only thing is that since I live in the USA, I had no idea what Air Canada was until this moment. It's a simple enough design where you don't have to know about Air Canada to understand the meaning though. The one thing I would change about it though would be making it the 4 star ball instead of the 1 star ball since the 4 start ball has more significance in the show.

Thanks for the input. I will fiddle around with the Dragonball.

ok so I think I agree with you and like the 4 star ball better. I think it just adds to the design with a minor detail. I also fixed the bit coming out of Nimbus as it was bothering me. So I guess version 2.

Well, I love it! :) The only thing that kind of bothers me is how sharp the angle is where the line comes off the Nimbus. I'd rather it was a bit curvier!

PS. I really like that its on a blue tee shirt. Perfect for DBZ. :)

a navy blue shirt would sell better.

I will try Navy again I just felt like it was to dark for the light of the design. I will upload a few different ones with different colored backgrounds and let people see what looks best.

Interesting shirt design and I'm all for more DBZ designs :).

Can you show us what it would look like if it said Kinto'un instead of Nimbus, please?

love it!

Yeah, what Drabaz said. More people would probably recognize Nimbus cause that's what FUNimation called it, but there are plenty of manga fans/other language fans that know where it's at.

thanks for all the comments everyone. I have a few different versions with the input you've all given that I will upload soon so we can try and see which is best.

Ok so here are some updated alternatives from the last design



and number 2

Very cool design. I prefer 'Nimbus' simply because I've only seen the dubbed version of the series and that's how I know it (never even heard of 'Kinto'un'). But yeah, this definitely works whether you get the Air Canada reference or not. I'd buy it.

I think the Nimbus version works best simply because (with the Japanese lettering) that includes fans of both the dub and the original. :) Also, thank you for making the curve curvier!

haha yeah I definitely like it better without the super sharp angle coming out of the FluffySpam. Also I think I agree with the "Air Nimbus" with the Japanese characters below it. So I think I am just going to submit it and see what happens lol.

Good luck! Hope it gets printed, I love it. :)

thank you very much. Though I have been thinking about starting a Redbubble or similar site to start selling some T's on that don't get chosen to be featured on here.

I'm not even a fan of DBZ, and I love this design. :) It's so simple, and clean. I also love the light blue shirt. It compliments the yellow and oranges just right.

Thanks you very much.

I love this - besides the great design, this happens to be one of my favorite color palettes.

thanks.

Yeah, I think it's best with Nimbus and Kinto'un written in Japanese. Awesome job! I'd buy it.

Thank you.

You might smooth out the yellow circle around the FluffySpam. Right now in the top right corner it has this bulge then tappers really quickly. Also right below that there looks to be a kink from one of the pin points you made. Everything else has these hard clean lines, even the FluffySpam, it just stool out to me.

Other than that it looks great (I too like the Nimbus with Japanese text below) even though I don't think most with get the Air Canada reference I think the design is solid enough without it.

I'm American, so I didn't get the reference, but still... looks pretty sweet! I like the version that just says "Air Nimbus" as the only text in it. Most dubbies go by "Nimbus," which I'm perfectly fine with. I feel like the Japanese text would be a bit too excessive. Really hope this gets made!