While I like the design. I feel like it's a lot compressed into a small illustration. I think you can get away with only using a single Ewok- namely the one with the bow and arrow.
Another thing, and this just may be me, but the bottom tree line (the lighter ones) feel like they draw my eyes right to the AT-ST/Ewoks- and I think you're sign is really nice and should get most of the attention directed towards it. Maybe open up the space by adding more of the dirt or removing some of the Ewoks.
amazing concept! however, this would look terrible on a shirt the way it is right now. What if you just do the galactic park service logo in greater detail!? I mean seriously, that would kick so much ass! and would make a much better shirt!
I agree. It's a great idea and great art so far, but I'm not sure about it on a shirt. what if you just took the sign, and maybe put a stormtrooper helmet on one of its posts?
Thank you all for the advice... took a little from most of it and came up with this (sorry Doc, didn't get the stormtrooper helm in there... lol) Let me know what you think:
Ok, how and why does subtle get thrown around here so often? I don't get it...the design is nice, but it's in no way a subtle star wars shirt...99% of all people seeing that on the street would know it's star wars...so where's the subtlety?
Submitted a couple of days ago... crossing my fingers. Do any of you who have had things printed know how long to expect for a response? Am I better off to email my designs in to [email protected] rather than use the submit page?
Another thing, and this just may be me, but the bottom tree line (the lighter ones) feel like they draw my eyes right to the AT-ST/Ewoks- and I think you're sign is really nice and should get most of the attention directed towards it. Maybe open up the space by adding more of the dirt or removing some of the Ewoks.
Then put it on a Blue T.