Teefury

looks really cool
the details, the typography - pretty impressive

not sure if I'd wear it as a tee, but it's looks terrific in itself

probably one of the better GB shirts I have seen in a while. very nice. if I had one crit, maybe that the dripping of the slime might be too over used and distracting from the other nice work you have done. I might suggest running it solid down the center behind "MOOD" and "SLIME" and keep the dripping toward the outer edges. that's really the only thing I can think of. great piece!

I like it. There has definitely been a lack of Ghostbusters shirts on Teefury, (I think I've only seen one or two) so another one would be great. The concept is strong, the details are strong, and the shirt as a whole is strong. Good luck!

Thanks everyone!

@ dakin_costello. Good call... I've been struggling with that area, I feel the typography is being drown out by the drips... I'm gonna give that a try...

yeah, it's a shame to detract from such a cool part of the design. can't wait to see what it looks like when you're done

Only thing I'd change is changing 'psychomagnatheric' into lower case. Don't think that font looks that great when all the letters are in capitals. And maybe a wee bit less slime like dakin_costello mentioned, but other that that it looks brilliant!

I'll try the small caps on that... Thanks!

It took me a couple of weeks to get to it.. but here are the changes. What do you guys think?

closer detail of the seal...

The detail on this looks seriously good. I'm not a big GB fan but this is some great art you got here. And the new design looks much better than the old one, which looked messy.

oh yeah, that looks much better! i would CERTAINLY buy this

Beautifully done. I'd be tempted to remove the drip that covers the second O of mood or make it minimal like the S overlap. But all in all it's a great design that really evokes the style of a 19th century label or print ad.

love this!

Do you guys think I should make the "Mood Slime" text bigger as well?

Just Submitted... fingers crossed!

too late for feedback, but i'm buying it if it comes up!!

How long should I wait before I post it to another site?

I'd like to know what other people's time process is like as well.

That's the bad thing about not having rejection letters, you don't know if you're in the maybe pile or you're being laughed from the other side of the computer as they delete your submission.

I give them about a month head start on everyone else. I figure if they are really interested they would respond by now and call first dibs on printing the design.

Post it another site now. Use a 4 week cycle process. There are sites that will take this shirt. It's too good to pass by everyone :)

Looks really awesome!

yeah, im gonna post this to another site i suppose... kind of discouraging tho...

It's not all that discouraging! I find it to be a way to better myself. I try to get better with each design. Make each joke in my punchline that much more funny. Also work on my drawing skills at the same time. Plus there are many other sites that will sell your t-shirt. Just keep coming up with ideas and never let it get you down. I know a site that will take this if you want to e-mail me. If not good luck! I love ghostbusters stuff so keep coming up with new ideas!

Your right man, I know it will sell somewhere! how do i get ahold of you?

Click on my user name- CodDesigns and it will take you to TeeFury profile. In my profile I have links set up. I have a twitter page so you can follow and tweet to me. I have a favebook fan page as well in which you can send me messages. Also my redbubble profile let's you send me bubble mail. Make sure you let me know that "upsidedown" is messaging me. If you stuff is on average this good and high quality I can easily guide you in the right direction.

typo- Facebook fan page. Everything of mine is under the handle of - CoDdesigns