I would buy this in a heartbeat. Not a fan of the green though. Personally I woulda made the green blue, and then make the Oods jacket blue as well.
It does need to be refined though a little bit
I love it! I'm a Whovian and I'm just starting to get into Pokémon and I would so buy this! But maybe play around with the colours. You should make his jacket/vest thing blue so it resembles Ash a bit more (if that doesn't go over your colour limit of course) and work on the background to make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing.
It does need to be refined though a little bit