ArmaNarma said: I don't hate the bottom text on the Zombieland one... it helps draw your eye to the zombie hands at the bottom, anyway. I just think it's phrased awkwardly. If you cross out the "free," it reads "ZOMBIE SINCE 2009" which doesn't make sense. If there was a way to phrase it so removing part of it (as if it's been spray-painted or blood-spattered over?) would still make it read like a proper sentence, I'd like it better.
bruceleeroy said: I absolutely love the Zombieland design but you should get rid of the bottom text and Twinkies part altogether. The Twinkies part is wrong for a couple of reasons. First it should say "sponsored by Hostess" as Hostess makes Twinkies. You wouldn't put sponsored by Big Macs, right? No, it would be sponsored by McDonald's. Secondly, Hostess or Twinkies wouldn't sponsor another business. It's not like Disneyworld has any sponsors. In my opinion, you should ditch it altogether. I also think your design is strong enough as it is without the bottom text, it's distracting.Don't get me wrong, your design is awesome, but I think those changes need to be made, because I really hope this gets printed.
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