My third submission to Teefury. This time I thought I'd post it here to get some feedback. Still waiting approval on the other 2 submissions (one Firefly, one original Artwork)
I've submitted both versions of this design. Of course, this should be printed on a red tee :)
Any constructive feedback is appreciated. Adjulation, gifts of Gold pressed Latinum or Roger Maris baseball cards are also gratefully accepted. But please, no Tribbles.
Scotty's Starship Repair Shop design by Chuffy

I've submitted both versions of this design. Of course, this should be printed on a red tee :)
Any constructive feedback is appreciated. Adjulation, gifts of Gold pressed Latinum or Roger Maris baseball cards are also gratefully accepted. But please, no Tribbles.
Scotty's Starship Repair Shop design by Chuffy

Nicely done. We need more shop designs!
Does anyone else have a preference over thru color or no thru color?
After it's (hopefully) published on Teefury, I'll put both versions up on my RedBubble page for any that like the other style instead.
Yeah, I agree that this is a legitimate criticism.
I felt I had to get as many knowing references in and make it feel like this is a genuine business you can trust.
It's a compromise between style and keeping enough references in. If I had created it for a real business, I would have made it less busy. I only break style rules for a reason, but I definitely agree with you. :)