The first design is the one I submitted. The second is touched up and given the worn look. I submitted the first one almost a month ago, and am wondering if I should resub the second or make any other changes and submit.
Also looking for critique in general to help with future designs. I feel like this is instantly recognizable, there haven't been a lot of Kill Bill or Charlie's Angels designs, and it's a good parody crossover. So, I'm wondering, is there something wrong with the execution of the design? Any comments are appreciated!


Also looking for critique in general to help with future designs. I feel like this is instantly recognizable, there haven't been a lot of Kill Bill or Charlie's Angels designs, and it's a good parody crossover. So, I'm wondering, is there something wrong with the execution of the design? Any comments are appreciated!


Well done, good idea, and nice to see the 70s logo. Universal HD is showing the old show: because the filmed it on 35mm film stock, converting it to HD widescreen was easy for them.
@Zerkaboid: I agree, as soon as I posted it up I thought I overdid the scratch, if I resub I will tone it down. Glad you confirmed that.
Thanks guys, I will make sure to comment on any critiques you post.
Couldn't you just subtract where the eyepatch would be that way the yellow would show through? Pretty sure that would work
That's what I was going to suggest.
Great idea though, and I really like how it turned out. that would put it over the top though.
Anyways, I've tried it out and would like to hear more opinions because I should probably listen to you guys or there's no reason to post critiques. Here's less scratch and more patch.
and this one just has the reduced scratch:
Either way, i really like the work
JoJo,
Could you explain why it looks like Clip Art? Is it that it's a simple design, because the design that inspired it is also simple? I have it linked below.
Or is it that the execution of the design isn't perfect? I'd appreciate anyone else's thoughts on this too, especially if they are specific.
Also I plan on fixing up the eye patch, that was just for testing that design.
I think it's awesome!
One suggestion though I don't think you need the black part in the middle of the patch. Just scoot the patch part itself to the left a bit and leave the bridge of her nose only cut off by the band. Does that make sense?
I think I like it with the eye patch, too.
I would buy one!....or two!