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Feedback, please? (Star Wars, Powerpuff Girls/DC)

by tworivers
rss 99 weeks ago
So...I'm totally new to this (as in, I downloaded Inkscape for the first time two days ago.) I'm pretty clueless about it all, so if you could give me advice/constructive criticism I'd really appreciate it.





Should probably mention that I got excited yesterday, jumped the gun, and submitted. Why, I don't know, because these definitely still need a lot of work. Sorry, curators :(





Anyways...feedback? Thank you!!!!





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    98 weeks ago
    LOVE the powerpuff girls! the idea is SO great. However I think that the background grey is too strong for the design. Maybe a lighter grey would work much better?
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    98 weeks ago
    I think we have two winners. Two days? You did that in two days? Yowser!!
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    98 weeks ago
    Star Wars one is great! But with the PPG one, they look off. I really like it! But Mostly Buttercup/Batgirl looks strange. IDK, something to think about
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    98 weeks ago
    Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated.
    drwhofan92 said: LOVE the powerpuff girls! the idea is SO great. However I think that the background grey is too strong for the design. Maybe a lighter grey would work much better?

    I originally had the PPG one on white but then I remembered that everyone seems to hate white shirts. Definitely going to try out the lighter gray!
    Jackpot777 said: I think we have two winners. Two days? You did that in two days? Yowser!!
    Haha let's just say I didn't get out much this weekend.
    mbecks114 said: Star Wars one is great! But with the PPG one, they look off. I really like it! But Mostly Buttercup/Batgirl looks strange. IDK, something to think about
    Yeah, I think so too...I think it's 'cause Buttercup's supposed to be green. And the hair definitely looks off. I'll work on it :)
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    98 weeks ago
    ^i have no idea how html works..sorry for the jumble haha
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    98 weeks ago
    feeling shameless...i'm going to make like snooki and bump-it.
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    98 weeks ago
    I think if you just take the hair off Buttercup, it'll look fine. It's a really good design though, I like it!

    And I just had the random thought that the Alderaan Rolls one would be ridiculously silly if the cinnamon rolls were the buns on the pillsbury dough boy. =p
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    98 weeks ago
    Love both these ideas!! The powerpuff girls look great, but, the background... Needs something. And the pilsbury starwars just totally rocks!! Would buy both if they were tees. :)
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    98 weeks ago
    If you are new, I'm extremely impressed. Great job on both designs. If I had to comment, I'm not of the lower font on the Star Wars design and I also agree that the grey background doesn't work well with the PPG. It's a great design which needs more than just a flat background. Maybe accent the characters somehow? Either way... nice job and keep it up.
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    98 weeks ago
    Thank you so much for the suggestions!!! I'll definitely work on the PPG background and find a new font for Pillsbury Leia, but probably not until the weekend...sadly, final exams > fun t-design making
    :(

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