Teefury

Well, it's got potential.
(love the solitary leaf, there.)

It's a tribute. He's my favorite Character!

Great design, and the "leaf on the wind" is a great touch. :o)

I love the idea! Maybe a few less fireflies? It looks a little cluttered.

gotta agree with fightingfish, 1st impression was WAY too many fireflies.

Yeah, I'll take a few out...

Like the idea, great potential. However I'd swap out Mal for River and/or Kaylee in her frufru dress. If you love Mal so much you have to have him in it, give him a different pose. Maybe with the net resting over his shoulder.

And as others have said, it is cluttered and you should take a few out, yeah. But don't you dare remove the leaf.

Jabberwocky said: Like the idea, great potential. However I'd swap out Mal for River and/or Kaylee in her frufru dress. If you love Mal so much you have to have him in it, give him a different pose. Maybe with the net resting over his shoulder.


And as others have said, it is cluttered and you should take a few out, yeah. But don't you dare remove the leaf.

I agree, and think itnwould be awesome as kaylee or river or both

Prefrence on kaylee though :)

LOVE the concept! Not crazy about the giant net. Maybe if it was River or Kaylee grabbing for them or something. But GREAT start!

love it! if you can just make the light of the ship just in circles because it would look like it's bursting to light speed already, fireflies hovers :D just saying..and lessen them a little, overall, that is cool! :D

zerobriant said: love it! if you can just make the light of the ship just in circles because it would look like it's bursting to light speed already, fireflies hovers :D just saying..and lessen them a little, overall, that is cool! :D

By just in circles do you mean like looping around the back of the ship? Like it's leaving rings behind?

OEBlaze said:

zerobriant said: love it! if you can just make the light of the ship just in circles because it would look like it's bursting to light speed already, fireflies hovers :D just saying..and lessen them a little, overall, that is cool! :D

By just in circles do you mean like looping around the back of the ship? Like it's leaving rings behind?

nope just a glowing circle for each ship:D with halftone

something like this

something like this

@zerobriant Okay, yeah. I was planning on half-toning it, but as I'm new to Illustrator, I'm having trouble figuring it out. For now I just used a gradient to show where it would be half-toned. Wait, were you saying around the whole ship?

just behind the ship :D like a real firefly :D

zerobriant said: just behind the ship :D like a real firefly :D

alright, I'll see what I can do. BTW, you're my favorite designer. Thanks for being awesome, and thanks for giving me advice :D

Thank you OEBlaze! glad i could help :D

what do u guys use to embed your WIP's onto here?

what do u guys use to embed your WIP's onto here?

Onimar said: what do u guys use to embed your WIP's onto here?

search the forums for TIPs by Jack77 he has all the details to help you:D

@zerobriant I still wasn't sure what you were thinking of, so I made up two designs.



Were you talking about the one on the left or right? (The dots will probably be smaller, it's just for visibility and concept.)

right one please, (small glow) and that looks cool, just make sure the shirt color is not that dark, so you can still see the silhouette :D nice work.

I love this! The leaf on the wind especially
I'd love to see Kaylee and River jumping for fireflies, but Mal does suit it more, considering he's Captain and all