Thanks guys @hateyhate - the overlapping lines is an easy fix and something ill try (because i havent yet) but I'm attempting to show the characters as 'nothing' or invisible.
Bummer, when I saw today's tee, I thought it came from this post. Same thing with the Hoth Wampas critique post and Tee. Still a great design, better luck next time.
Cheers - it's called "A Show About Nothing" BTW
Yeah - it looks ace on blue.
Thank you - your vote has been lodged.
A Show About Nothing II on redbubble.com
That's the best idea I've heard all week, cheers !