Teefury

oh, forgot to mention.. the name of the design is "The Late Queen Bee of England". you can also check my anothersite submission of it (before i added halftones and such) right here.

I like the drawing, but I think it'd be better if you hand drew the type :)

thanks for the suggestion Rikkib! ill upload another version with the type drawn out. Thanks!

As you please: here is a copy with written type. Thanks for the suggestion Rikkib, i think it really helped the design. I also changed the halftones of the eyes.

what do you guys think?

like the design. like the details.

thanks armPittman (nice name by the way).

Nice changes!

thanks arrow. im going to upload the placement soon. if anybody has any other suggestions, dont hesitate to tell me!

I love this and could really use a new shirt of that color

you know what would be really sweet? If is was one those shirt with print on the inside showing through to the the outside with the honeycombs being the inside print.

To me the bee itself needs to be filled in a little more with some color (and by color I mean even just more black). At first I had a hard time telling what it was (until I read the name of it) because there is so much line detail there. Maybe for just the head and mandibles/antennae or something, I don't know, just a suggestion.

Biotwist: that would be so epic great idea! I've always wanted a shirt like that and i think the style would actually work here.

Asystole: thanks for the suggestion! I'll work around with the shading a little more.

In the meantime, here are some placements/other color options. Tell me what you think!



besides the yellow, i think i like the mint the best :)

im liking the red! :p

mint and red

thanks guys! I agree :)

i agree with asystole on bringing out the bee as much as you can! right now, the mirror stands out more than the bee queen herself. other than that, nice detail....i don't think i could bring myself to buy this shirt though. its too much for me :P