I agree with CaitlinNerd. Most of the t-shirts have a more obscure reference that non-fandoms wouldn't immediately understand. This one is obvious, and the cheerios look clownish to me in a not cute way. A Sue Sylvester design would definitely be a neat approach for a Teefury-friendly designs though and it's be great to see a Glee shirt here. Good luck. :)
I agree with Slasher444. I also feel that it's a bit too cartoon-ish. If it was more uniform-ish I think it would make it. Like if it's closer to the uniforms the cheerios wear y'know? I'm a huge Glee fan so I think this is a great idea to create a Glee shirt.
well thanks guys for responding, appreciate your input!
ah! thanks for the tip!! ^__^
This design is going to need some work if you want to appeal to guys
A sue sylvester design would be pretty cool though.