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heres mine i call it "We Want Out" its paper people that dont want to hold hands anymore, i dont know i just thought it was funny, im a student in achitecture if you wanted to know lol

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"We Want Out" its paper people that dont want to hold hands anymore, i dont know i just thought it was funny, im a student in achitecture if you wanted to know lol




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You could do with a lot more expression and movement in your submission. It's pretty well impossible to tell what it is without an explanation.

Why are they in 3d if they're paper? Maybe try looking at how some older games like Paper Mario and Parappa the Rapper addressed this. Also try to give them actual facial expressions and the impression they're trying to pull away from each other.

thanks for the constructive criticism i appreciate it, i dont know why the are 3d to be honest i was just being playful and the facial expressions are all text based its sorta my style T_T get it ?

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Here is a rough sketch of something i plan on submitting once its finished.

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GAHHitsJON said:

Here is a rough sketch of something i plan on submitting once its finished.

they beat you to it

whoops wrong quote

christianasaur i love the dear tomorrow ,dear yesterday ones they are great,

@ winterartwork: darnit. oh well, but mine's a little less political.. and simpler. haha. i'm not sure that's good. but whatever :]

and thank you, dippycow5.

I submitted this today. If you haven't watched Firefly it won't make a lot of sense but then again you should really watch Firefly!

Yay or neigh?

p.s, sharks make horrible replacements for seals, just sayin'.

thestray said:

OMG that shirt is so hilarious I laughed very hard. You need to make the text in the quotes bigger/more readable for it to work as a shirt. Otherwise amazing!

Just submitted... Though it uploaded a bit quirky...

Well the text would be bigger/more readable on the shirt. The word bubbles really aren't the focus of the shirt but I'll probably change the font.

jeremiah was a said:

Yay or neigh?


p.s, sharks make horrible replacements for seals, just sayin'.

thats great!

dear thestray,
do you have a facebook fanpage for your art,
so that i may "like" your work?

sincerely christiana

jeremiah was a said:

Yay or neigh?


p.s, sharks make horrible replacements for seals, just sayin'.

lol, my name is Simon, I would buy this!!

Look At My Guts:

Image is saved for web not the best looking quality.

thestray said:

I LOLed in my mouth a bit.

Also, no one eat the cotton candy in Jeremiah's shark. I don't think that would be healthy for you.

1up01 said:

thestray said:

I LOLed in my mouth a bit.


Also, no one eat the cotton candy in Jeremiah's shark. I don't think that would be healthy for you.

I don't even know why, but this is absolutely hilarious.

Dr.Bender said:

1up01 said:

thestray said:

I LOLed in my mouth a bit.



Also, no one eat the cotton candy in Jeremiah's shark. I don't think that would be healthy for you.

I don't even know why, but this is absolutely hilarious.

Me either. I especially like the horrified look in the shark's eye.

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