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I personally wouldn't.

danielle said: I personally wouldn't.

not funny/clever enough....or just kinda boring

Just kinda boring.

Although, I do like the use of bright colors.

It has potential, but i agree that it's kinda boring.

mo92 said: It has potential, but i agree that it's kinda boring.

yeah it is just kinda the pun and that is it.....not sure what to add

loose the speech bubble and make it bigger atleast, maby some shadows and highlights?

Maybe..
But it`d be a LOT stronger if you could tie it back to the original quote from taxidriver somehow..

Add a mo-hawk perhaps? Maybe some of those super cool hidden gun thingys?

I think the drawing is bad, the handle, the balloon, use the overlapping colors technique to create better depth, shading, and I would redraw the handle.

no it lacks the zest to spice up. jazz it up though.

this is what happens when I try to do a joke shirt....FAIL

not really

we should be able to make poll threads...

ok maybe this one

Thats pretty cool for a "misplaced" shirt. Would you do more with other stations, slogans, etc.?

I would buy that Second one. Totally :P

Maybe not on Grey though.

how about this one.....I am on a Looooost theme

not a loost fan but the driveshaft looks pretty cool

second and third look good,
but the first... well I haven't seen Taxi Driver so the pun is Looooost on me, and the colors (imho) are too much...

I like the drive shaft one but the design would be wasted with just a single front print, to fully finish it as a tee it would really benefit from a back print with tour venue list. This would also give you chance to add things that only major Looooost fans would recognise to fit in with the thought process of the show.

The Swan Looooost shirt if good, but it would be better without any phrase from the show.

The Driveshaft one is really good, it's too bad the fictional band in the show has no good songs though. Way too poppy.

I love both the Looooost shirts and would buy them in a second.

i love the live together die alone.

I would but the last (black) one. I am a sucker for black tees.

On the first one, its not the concept that seems childish to me but the color scheme. The colors are just too bright and simple for my tastes, it kinda pulls you in but doesn't deliver.

Love the Loooost shirts. I'd def consider the Driveshaft one.

Perseus said: On the first one, its not the concept that seems childish to me but the color scheme. The colors are just too bright and simple for my tastes, it kinda pulls you in but doesn't deliver.


Love the Loooost shirts. I'd def consider the Driveshaft one.

Well that is the color of a speak and spell which was a childs toy.

if you like the drive shaft one.....follow this link...wink


http://www.flickr.com/photos/atomicchild/4429829129/

I think it's awful. Sorry :-)