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Televektors

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First - CasE

  • CasEsaid 182 weeks ago

    Not a huge fan of this color combination :(
  • thejakeyl88said 182 weeks ago

    Why say first? Why? Anyways, this is a really sweet design, love the vintage look. No money for me still, darn it. Been missing out on some good shirts here lately. Keep em coming!
  • bahbahbahsaid 182 weeks ago

    Yeah the design is cool, but I don't know if I like it on brown. Maybe a real dark navy blue would make me consider buying this.
  • Gimmiksaid 182 weeks ago

    Everyone is always all excited to be the 1st to post. I think it's kind of annoying. Waste of a post. Anyways

    I like this design. Clean and simple. I don't see me wearing this though.
  • fightabunnysaid 182 weeks ago

    Amazing work on the portfolio link.
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    jimiyosaid 182 weeks ago

    I saw this under the submissions. Very delicious.
  • jecrtsaid 182 weeks ago

    Nice! I think the colors are great!
  • cdotysaid 182 weeks ago

    I like the hi-lights, but the design fails to 'grab' me.
  • cbass99said 182 weeks ago

    nice design, refreshing! cool work APNEAFIX!

    p.s.
    if you guys want to know who's eighth, it's me! because i'm the eighth one on the list.
  • cbass99said 182 weeks ago

    smurf, as i was typing, i became the 10th! sheit.
  • Kenonsaid 182 weeks ago

    buyying! first one in about a week I really like
  • curb1510said 182 weeks ago

    So tempted, but like bahbahbah (never expected that that would come into a sentece)I think a nice navy for the blank who have been great.
    Still, lovely work.
  • jindcsaid 182 weeks ago

    kind of looks forced or incomplete because it's just on the top - might work as a whole-front design, or just centered lower.
  • biotwistsaid 182 weeks ago

    hey at least both shirts are the same color
  • cls62said 182 weeks ago

    I agree, put it on navy.
  • AGrant311said 182 weeks ago

    Not first. I always wanted to do that.
  • thejakeyl88said 182 weeks ago

    I think the look of it, how its faded at the top, really works well with the limits of printing. Instead of a defined cutoff point its pretty well faded and blended.
  • addstevesaid 182 weeks ago

    This design is a bit uninspired.

    The white lines around the curves make it look shiny, which seems to be in direct conflict with the vintage feel.

    I also agree with others that the color combo is not quite working either.

    Hope I am not being too harsh but I assume other artists want constructive criticism.

    These critiques are merely my opinion, so please consider them as such only.

    Congrats on your win.
  • addstevesaid 182 weeks ago

    On a more positive note, I really like a lot of the work on your portfolio site.
  • verilenssaid 182 weeks ago

    Cheese IS fantastic, isn't it???

    I'm torn on this one :/ I actually like the brown. I agree that the design ends at the top a bit abruptly. Uuuuunnggghhh...can't decide...oh well, I suppose I've got all day :)
  • eludingsunsaid 182 weeks ago

    i actually like the colour combo, in a way.

    but still no buy, looks like a design i could pick up anywhere.
  • YutFreesaid 182 weeks ago

    Layne: It's possible to set up your board to delete any post whose content is "first" or any iteration thereof ("Gargamel," etc.).
  • eludingsunsaid 182 weeks ago

    i agree with yutfree, something along the lines of at least attempting to stop the "first" post.

    they're are such a waste.

    even better yet, people could just stop doing them on their own, wouldn't that be even easier?
  • Arrowsaid 182 weeks ago

    nice distressed feel
  • hardluckartsaid 182 weeks ago

    this design looks weird on brown. i agree that it would look better on another cool color like navy or a darker green.
  • porschefreak707said 182 weeks ago

    happy much
  • a.mar.illosaid 182 weeks ago

    green on brown works fantastic here, me encanta:)
  • snarkygalsaid 182 weeks ago

    i definitely think some sort of moderation and more lolcats and kittens are needed on this board.
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    jimiyosaid 182 weeks ago

    indeed snarky. indeed.
  • desertimportedsaid 182 weeks ago

    Even more annoying than people with "first" comments, are people who allow it to bother them ;)

    Not feeling much love for this design. Aesthetically it feels off from the color of the shirt to the placement and composition. I'm cool with patterns and trendy looking shapes with a little vintage grunginess going on, but it just feels like there is nothing purposeful about this design.

    A lot of the shirts lately have left me with this "meow" feeling lately. I went from buying 3 shirts a week to nothing in the past 2 or 3 weeks now. =(
  • jasonahurleysaid 182 weeks ago

    I love the design, and the color scheme. Not sure how I feel about the "vintage" aspect, though. I know it's probably just me, but the vintage look hasn't ever done anything for me. I'll probably buy this shirt anyway, that design is too sleek.
  • Crushemsaid 182 weeks ago

    I like it :)
  • fortunefordisastersaid 182 weeks ago

    It's definitely growing on me the more I look at it, but it doesn't instantly make me hit buy - I think it's the brown, the colours look good together on the design, but actually on me as a t-shirt, I'd have to agree with everyone who suggested navy as an alternative. Still, great vintage design, although if it was a little more distressed I'd really go for it.
  • skonen_bladessaid 182 weeks ago

    Pretty sweet design. I like its simplicity.
  • Merovingiansaid 182 weeks ago

    swing and a miss (for me). Just don't dig on the colors much. Or the design. But like the portfolio art better :)
  • so_simplesaid 181 weeks ago

    it's an interesting design; but I don't like the way it cuts off...
  • moetineeshasaid 181 weeks ago

    boring and lame colors
  • AlexWillmssaid 181 weeks ago

    I think people are being too critical of this. I would sooner wear brown than blue, in the case of this design. I agree that the cutoff is a bit awkward, but other than that I like it, and so do the other people I've talked to.
  • erinleesaid 181 weeks ago

    Nope I think the colors are quite nice. Just the way it's cut off.
  • SheRockssaid 181 weeks ago

    Cool design, but not a buy for me. Bought too many tees this month. Would've liked the design to cross to the shoulders and fade.
  • porschefreak707said 181 weeks ago

    Fail.
  • 83Grafiksaid 181 weeks ago

    weird design.
  • kizatsaid 181 weeks ago

    I really like it... but alas... teefury has yet to give me the credit line that I need to support the addiction I have.

    *sips coffee* At least starbucks gave in.
  • mspaintdotexesaid 181 weeks ago

    I love it, picking this one up.
  • thesamw1sesaid 181 weeks ago

    I think the color combination is good. I mean, have you gone outside in the spring or summer. You'll find brown and green. It's a good color match. However, I'm not a huge fan of the positioning of the design. Maybe if it was on the side or more in a corner. Just something to make it more interesting.

    A good shirt all around :)
  • kizatsaid 181 weeks ago

    snarkygal... does LOLsquirrels work?

    umakinsumlolsquirrelsinder.jpg
  • zepp62said 181 weeks ago

    The design is awesome as is the color choice. A lot of me wants to buy it, but the fact that it only takes up the upper half of the shirt deters me. If the design covered more of the shirt, I'd be all over it.
  • Hyndmanysaid 181 weeks ago

    We can NEVER get this day back again.

    "It doesn't have any particular meaning."

    You said it yourself.
  • gravionGRsaid 181 weeks ago

    Even more annoying than the people who get bothered by "first" posts, are people who feel the need to post that they are even more annoying than the first posts.

    *Realizes the paradoxical daisy chain this will create.*
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    jimiyosaid 181 weeks ago

    You know what else is annoying...

    The Noid.

    Always tryin' to steal my pizza!
  • Theosaid 181 weeks ago

    Yo! Noid was such a hard game
  • apneafixsaid 181 weeks ago

    Thanks for the comments.
    ....didnt know this came out today
  • snarkygalsaid 181 weeks ago

    Jimi, you made me :D again! And, yes, Kizat LOL squirrels work!
  • buellx1lsaid 181 weeks ago

    i kinda like the color scheme, reminds me of a retro mint chocolate chip!
  • Magicwandsaid 84 weeks ago

    addsteve said: This design is a bit uninspired.



    The white lines around the curves make it look shiny, which seems to be in direct conflict with the vintage feel.



    I also agree with others that the color combo is not quite working either.



    Hope I am not being too harsh but I assume other artists want constructive criticism.



    These critiques are merely my opinion, so please consider them as such only.



    Congrats on your win.


    It's gr8 pure graphic & i love the colours! love the fact it's high up! love the shiny bits the fade the debris it's all good! Chocolate brown deep sky blue & yellow tshirts are pretty much all i buy! NO MORE BLACK SHIRTS!!